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PostSubject: Write On Page 21   Write On Page 21 I_icon_minitimeMon Mar 01, 2010 2:18 pm

For each group of words write 3 sentences in sequence using the words.

Look at the example to help you.


first - - - then - - - last

First, I tied my right shoe. Then, I tied my left shoe. Last, I went outside to play soccer.


1. morning - - - afternoon - - - night

2. yesterday - - - today - - - tomorrow

3. first - - - then - - - finally

4. last year - - - this year - - - next year


Name1st writing2nd writingGrade
Luke
do again
XXX
XXX
Hyeon-Jin
do again
FBC
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
Name
Name
Name
Name
Name
Name


FBC = feedback coming
TBG = to be graded


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PostSubject: first............................   Write On Page 21 I_icon_minitimeTue Mar 02, 2010 2:04 pm

First I went to the party then I ate some food finally I played games

In the morning I ate breakfast at afternoon I ate lunch at night I ate dinner.

last year I didn't studyed this year I will study little next year I will study hard.

yesterday I came home early today I came home little late tomorrow.


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PostSubject: Re: Write On Page 21   Write On Page 21 I_icon_minitimeWed Mar 03, 2010 12:43 pm

Last year, I was 9 years old. This year, I am 10 years old. Next year, I will be 11 years old.
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PostSubject: First Feedback for Hyeon-Ji   Write On Page 21 I_icon_minitimeMon Mar 08, 2010 2:30 pm

Hyeon-Jin wrote:
First[_] I went to the party[_] then I ate some food[_] finally I played games[_]

In the morning[_] I ate breakfast[_] [___] at afternoon [_] I ate lunch[_] at night[_] I ate dinner.

last year[_] I didn't studyed[_] this year[_] I will study [__] little[_] next year[_] I will study hard.

yesterday[_] I came home early[_] today[_] I came home [__] little late[_] tomorrow[_] [_____Your sentences is not finished____________________________________________].

This is a good effort Hyeon-Jin. Remember you need to use capital letters and punctuation marks[. / , / ! / ?].

Change the word = I saw three hours of cartoons on TV.
Fix the mistake = I last the ball. // I am do my homework. // i forgot my book.
Erase a word = I lost the the ball.
Add a word = [___]

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PostSubject: Feedback for Luke   Write On Page 21 I_icon_minitimeMon Mar 08, 2010 2:32 pm

Luke1502 wrote:
Last year, I was 9 years old. This year, I am 10 years old. Next year, I will be 11 years old.

This homework is incomplete Luke. You need to write sentences for each group of words. There are 4 groups of words and therefore I should see at least 12 sentences.

Change the word = I saw three hours of cartoons on TV.
Fix the mistake = I last the ball. // I am do my homework. // i forgot my book.
Erase a word = I lost the the ball.
Add a word = [___]

Write your new writing in another post.
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PostSubject: fixing   Write On Page 21 I_icon_minitimeTue Mar 09, 2010 3:28 pm

First I went to the birthday party. Then I ate pizza, cakes, hambuger. Finally we played games.

In the morning I ate bread with jam. In the afternoon I ate lunch for pizza. In the night I ate chicken.

Last year I think I didn't study. This year I also think I studyied little. Next year I now I should study hard.

yesterday I think the teacher send us home early because we did well. Today the teacher send us late because we were to noisy. Tomorrow I think I will go home late.
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PostSubject: Re: Write On Page 21   Write On Page 21 I_icon_minitimeWed Mar 10, 2010 5:38 pm

First, I was going to school.Then, I studied.Finally, school was over.
I the morning, I woke up.In the afternoon, I did my homework.In the night, I slept.
Last year, I was 9years old.This year, I am 10years old. Next year, I will be 11years old.
Yesterday, It was cloudy. Today, it is rainy.Tomorrow, it will be sunny.
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