Posts : 358 Join date : 2009-09-23 Age : 49 Location : Changwon, Korea / Ottawa, Canada
Subject: Write On page 21 Tue Feb 16, 2010 1:20 pm
Write a paragraph about your future. Tell about your plans. Write about what you might be doing two years from now, five years from now, and ten years from now. Use sequence words to amke your writing clearer.
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Grade
Harold
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Hye-Jin
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Hyeon-Joong
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Yoon-Ah
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Sang-Jun
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Sang-Jun
Posts : 17 Join date : 2009-12-03
Subject: page 21. Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:18 am
After that two years later, I'll graduate middle school and enter the ordinary high school. After that 5 years later from now, I'll graduate high school and enter the ordinary university. After that 10 years from now, I'll become thief. So I rob the Yannick's house. I'll steal Yannick's everything! or I'll become scientist. So I'll invent the thief robot. also that will rob the Yannick's house!!
Last edited by Sang-Jun on Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:22 pm; edited 1 time in total
Yoon-Ha
Posts : 36 Join date : 2009-10-01
Subject: Re: Write On page 21 Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:19 pm
Two years later, l'll be shang- shan high school student, then l'll study harder.After five years, l'll be seoul university student. l'll study law and other countries language. After 10 years, l'll be a diplomats of korea.
Harold
Posts : 40 Join date : 2009-09-28
Subject: Re: Write On page 21 Tue Mar 02, 2010 3:29 pm
Two years later, I'll go to Pangyo Middle School. Five years later, I will go to Seoul Science High School. Ten years later, I will go to KAIST University.
Hyeon-Joong
Posts : 28 Join date : 2009-09-24
Subject: my future Tue Mar 02, 2010 6:36 pm
After three years later I will go to self-built high school. and I will study very hard for my future plan. after I graduate high school, I will go to university. some students think It's finish. but It's just starting point of my dream. I will enter the graduate school, and get a doctor's degree. then I will be a professor of university.
Hye-Jin
Posts : 37 Join date : 2009-09-28
Subject: Re: Write On page 21 Sun Mar 07, 2010 11:53 am
After 3years I`ll go to Anmin middle school and after five years I`ll maybe go to Changwon high shcool and Aftter 10 years I`ll go to Geongsang univercity.Then I`m going to live alone.