Posts : 358 Join date : 2009-09-23 Age : 49 Location : Changwon, Korea / Ottawa, Canada
Subject: Write On page 9 Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:01 pm
First topic message reminder :
Using one of the 4 titles given on page 9, write a paragraph. Remember to only include sentences that are related to your topic sentence.
Name
1st writing
2nd writing
3rd writing
Grade
Harold
do again
do again
Good
Good
Hye-Jin
do again
do again
XXX
XXX
Hyeon-Joong
do again
do again
do again
XXX
Yoon-Ah
do again
do again
Very Good
Very Good
Sang-Jun
do again
do again
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
XXX
FBC = feedback coming TBG = to be graded
Last edited by Admin on Mon Mar 01, 2010 2:08 pm; edited 6 times in total
Author
Message
Hye-Jin
Posts : 37 Join date : 2009-09-28
Subject: cold day Sat Mar 06, 2010 12:47 pm
The water became ice .And from morning the temperature was freezing. I wore warm cloths and went to the academy.It the academy they put on the heater, so it was nt so cold.But when I went to drink water so I mixed with hot water.It was a very hot day.
Sang-Jun
Posts : 17 Join date : 2009-12-03
Subject: page.9 Tue Mar 09, 2010 8:38 pm
I have a basement. This is a wonderful playing place! I can play computer games for 5 hours, I can watch my ultramodern TV, play catch ball, listen to music, eat a pizza, sleeping,etc. I can do anything for 24 hours a day in this great hideout. but anybody never scolds me because no one knows. When I'm sick of playing, I go home.
Subject: Write On page 9 
Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:01 pm
