Posts : 358 Join date : 2009-09-23 Age : 49 Location : Changwon, Korea / Ottawa, Canada
Subject: Write On page 7 Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:59 pm
First topic message reminder :
Choose one of the topics sentences given in your book on page 7. Write a paragraph making your topic sentence the first sentence. The rewrite your paragraph placing your topic sentence in a different position within your paragraph.
Name
1st writing
2nd writing
3rd writing
Grade
Harold
do again
Very Good
XXX
Very Good
Hye-Jin
do again
do again
XXX
XXX
Hyeon-Joong
do again
do again
Very Good
Very Good
Yoon-Ah
do again
do again
Excellent
Excellent
Sang-Jun
do again
do again
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
XXX
Name
XXX
XXX
XXX
XXX
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Last edited by Admin on Mon Mar 01, 2010 12:35 pm; edited 11 times in total
Author
Message
Hye-Jin
Posts : 37 Join date : 2009-09-28
Subject: hw Sat Mar 06, 2010 12:33 pm
I love to walk at the park in the spring .I see flowers there then I go through the flowers and butterflies going over the flowers.It is a very beautiful sight.
Sang-Jun
Posts : 17 Join date : 2009-12-03
Subject: page.7 Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:18 pm
When I'm going outside, I don't wear nether of a coat or jacket in the winter, because these are cumbersome. So I only wear single clothes on the normal temperature. But I should wear a coat or jacket below zero temperature. So I hate when the outside is very cold. The next time, I'll have a jacket when I go outside.
Subject: Write On page 7 
Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:59 pm
